Wednesday, April 15, 2009

What Are You? ? Comments

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when i was in the place of dark,
u guided me wit a ray of light...
u sprinkled onto me with golden marks,
& made it cloudless, just out of sight...
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Neha Aradhye
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anurag duggal 15 April 2009

i like the whisky waala line very creative...always try using unconventional words in ur poems makes it very interesting.... :))

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Dhanesh Aradhye 15 April 2009

ya.. seems lyk lyrics.. vista, alpha huh.. cool words yaar.. liked it lot..

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Neha Aradhye

Neha Aradhye

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