when i was in the place of dark, 
u guided me wit a ray of light...
u sprinkled onto me with golden marks, 
& made it cloudless, just out of sight...
                
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ya.. seems lyk lyrics.. vista, alpha huh.. cool words yaar.. liked it lot..
i like the whisky waala line very creative...always try using unconventional words in ur poems makes it very interesting.... :))