Thursday, May 1, 2008

What Are We? Comments

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Sometimes I wonder if we all see the same colors
or if someone is color blind and they just dont know it!

Whats beyond our universe?
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melissa arellano
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Melissa Coventry 01 May 2008

This poem evokes mind-freezing questions that plague the best of us especially of the universe and Heaven.. Yet your poem express them in a way that a reader cannot forget these questions exist and agree with your resolutions! .. Wonderfully demostrated ideas of forever to be unanswered questions. Thank you, Mel xx

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