What Are Fathers Made Of? Comments

very solid poem Diane

thats very good.i wish all farthers were like that, kind, loving, n always there n stuff. but i enjoyed reading this poem, i think its great.

A lovely explanation of what a Father is. I enjoyed the read. Nice. Can I say on the last stanza, I would have put ' in the darkest night' which would flow better with ' to their own before flight'. Just a thought! ! ! Not a criticism! Love Ernestine XXX