Saturday, April 26, 2008

What? And, Why Is This Happening? Comments

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We are a part of this creation.
Envision yourself in the universe...
Above and looking down upon Earth.
Look around you.
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Lawrence S. Pertillar
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Lawrence S. Pertillar 26 April 2008

LOLOLOLOL...stop it! Man, your comments are hilarious.

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Michael Pruchnicki 26 April 2008

Who's (sic) womb, indeed? Your fans love you and your incoherence, Lawrence! Wonderful contents, right! I know a good instructor in syntax and grammar, old bean, perhaps she might be able to help?

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Ernestine Northover 26 April 2008

Great piece of writing Lawrence, I really enjoyed reading this one, wonderful contents and a real pleasure to find. A thought provoking poem, with my sentiment also. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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Duncan Wyllie 26 April 2008

Who's womb is this? We come to sit waiting to be delivered? Very clever Lawrence, but then.. Perhaps what really matters in our here and now is what is on our inside Take care X Love duncan X

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