Wednesday, July 25, 2012

What Am I Going To Do Comments

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What am a I going to do
when it all comes to an end
where am I going to go
when it's time for me
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Valerie Dohren 25 July 2012

Weirder and weirder - if you don't know what you are writing about King, how is anyone else supposed to know! ! !

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Captain Cur 25 July 2012

Commenting on your own poem insures one comment, I refrain from commenting on my own because I am too easy on myself. I don't want to know the name of the band. King Bing Bang. Yes, pirates from a sense of humor although they are seldom funny. Liked the song.

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King Big Head 25 July 2012

Wow, your so fantastic at poetry, sometimes I have to pinch myself just to make sure I am you. Your the best, I forgive you for getting lemon, and yes I still want to marry me. I will see you in the mirror tonight, don't dare be late. There you go again with your orders, don't get above yourself. How can I be getting above myself when I am you It is you who is writing this so that means your just fighting with yourself. Oh am I now. If that is true why am I even answering. Maybe because your not right in the head. You take that back. No. Take it back. No. The weddings off again. Baby. No King. What ever.

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