What Am I? Comments

Good rhyme, Good flow, Good story, Good job Margaret!

a very interestng point of view. I love the question at the end of the poem is a very powerful finish, it really sums up the analogy I feel you are expressing. I love the Idea of depicting humans as part animal and part human, what the Oxford academics call 'human-animals' and how you tie the tides of the universe to what can be called fate of rather the powers of mysteries of the universe if i may call it that. very interesting poem, with lots of depth. oh and don't mind my blabbering’s I really enjoyed reading youer poetry

I love this one Margaret.