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Sir, this is precious poem! Well penned.....5 stars

the poem is good and just right in size.

did not follow, Mind didn’t allow, Hide face under pillow, Some bitter pills to swallow,

did not follow, Mind didn’t allow, Hide face under pillow, Some bitter pills to swallow, ........10

Sun was blazing, Heat waves with direct rays, Forcing people to find some ways, Shelter, tree’s shade or whatever possible, .......10

Found one labourer, Working under sun, Sun on top with full afternoon, Sweating and digging,

I did not follow, Mind didn’t allow, Hide face under pillow, Some bitter pills to swallow,

Sun was blazing, Heat waves with direct rays, Forcing people to find some ways,

did not follow, Mind didn’t allow, ........10

Forcing people to find some ways, Shelter, tree’s shade or whatever possible, indeed good one....10

Sun was blazing, Heat waves with direct rays, Forcing people to find some ways............10

Forcing people to find some ways, Shelter, tree’s shade or whatever possible, ....10

Sun was blazing, Heat waves with direct rays, Forcing people to find some ways, .....10

Well you are so dear So far but so near Can you for a while land your ear to hear? Have from me nothing to fear....10

Hide face under pillow, Some bitter pills to swallow.....10

may get or today borrow Who will give me tomorrow? ....10

did not follow, Mind didn’t allow, Hide face under pillow, Some bitter pills to swallow........10

may get or today borrow Who will give me tomorrow? .....10

Will you eat some food? ” It is fresh and good, No, Madame, I am sorry, Food is no worry, .....10