Saturday, July 30, 2011

What A World Comments

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In this world,
the dream of the past
hunting the present
trying to drawn the feotus
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Adeola Babalola
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Allemagne Roßmann 16 September 2011

Splendid and simultaneously spectacular write...well done and thanks for sharing

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Terence George Craddock 01 August 2011

many interesting thoughts, especially needing the sound of the wise, with wisdom from the 'Calm of the desert/ to get echo of wilderness./ And the direction of the waves' The desert sentiment remains me of these lines I wrote back in 87 in the second stanza from 'Foundation Stone' Across lonely empty land can a man rise can he grow above deceit deceptive human insight? Would that I could withstand remain in cleansing desert for too numerous are snares. Set in devious parts of city lurking in blind alleyway. How few have strength will or reactions to avoid. sometimes wisdom is seasoned through contemplation in the wilderness. God speed on you journey. Terence

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Allemagne Roßmann 31 July 2011

need the Calm of the desert to get echo of wilderness. And the direction of the waves on the sea ...............loved the way it expressed ur poetic abilities.

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Abdallah Gamal 31 July 2011

Nice poem, , really nice poem :)

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