What A Wonderful World..! Comments

when theY'RE trying.....nice poem though

people are dying, yes, we need a change in our thoughts the poem is heart felt. keep it up get 10

I agree with Sumaira too.. we can change the world. And we will. we are leaving the worst now, but this will make us grow up, this will make us realize of what we have to do. nice poem

I agree with Sumaira...youth can change the world...nice thought 10

Bilal youth hav power 2 change th world.. Ths world need CHANGE... 'If v cn thn v will' so dn't say how...yer one smile is enough 4 it friend +8 4 u artistic write.

Hello Bilal, I read all your poems and every one of them was very emotional, poignant, and sad but also very beautiful, and beautifully written. With the greatest of respect, I myself wrote sad poems along the same lines, about death and all that. I feel now that the ones I write these days are more about life and death and stuff. but at the same time they are still tinged with that hint of sadness and melancholy. keep writing and see how your writing develops. i'd like to read more of them. keep going.

im not too sure about reading the same verse twice but..... the words mean alot.. good poem

this is very good poem because this poem gives message send me more poems

I think the twist of your title is really clever as the last line says it all. Great repetition which is not irritating as it can sometimes be and you have got what it takes to enjoy and share your writing with others. Well done! Karin Anderson

The verse benefits by the repetition here Bilal - - and you made a very appealing case......... heartfelt and honest....... very good......10 from Fay.

A clever use of repetition and another anguished cry from your heart, along with the sardonic title!

Hi Bilal, I liked the repetition of 'how can we live' for it drives the message home the first, second, a third time and over... So true and it's the basic nature of all humans to lie, ignore, neglect, and not see... Thanks Deva

Last line answers many problems in life. People like lies that seem good at the time. BUT, the truth will set you free.

exactly how could we love when every ones hating? how could we heal when everyones hurtin?

I, too, wonder if this world is wonderful. And if we can laugh when we suppose to cry, talk when we suppose to listen, there is no doubt where we're going to lead the world's fate. Nice Piece

Life is paradox of which both extremes meet to balance this world.Without evil we would never appreciate the good things life offers.Very philosophical.

Profound poetical questions. I like the way you repeated the same verse. It encourages the reader to more closely consider these important questions. Great write, my friend. A...10 from me. Richard