Sunday, August 30, 2009

**************what A Woman Can Do***************1979 Comments

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when a woman can bring beauty into the heart of man
she knows that she is on the right track.
for man will always try to hide the feelings
he has locked up inside.
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Louis Rams 05 August 2019

when a woman who works and parties is one you should read for truth and laughter

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Jane Campion 03 August 2019

A truly insightful poem. It is beautifully written.

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louis rams 25 February 2019

thank you so much for that nice comment

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Jaishree Nair 25 February 2019

nice lines. A woman is definitely endowed with powers and if utilised wisely can bring strength into her man's stride.Enjoyed reading

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Ernest Makuakua 23 September 2016

So true and well said indeed a woman can do that

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Kim Barney 28 January 2016

The RIGHT woman can accomplish much good and turn a semi-worthless man into somebody respectable. Good poem.

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Louis Rams 29 January 2016

thank you for the true words

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Louis Rams 29 January 2016

thank you for those true words

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Edward Kofi Louis 25 December 2015

Man and woman made from the beginning. Nice work.

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 17 June 2010

‘for a woman can bring out the feelings that he never knew’ …sure modern medicine has discovered ‘endorphin’ luller from brain…augmented by state inner calmness that women can trigger…you’ve nicely stated ‘eye-language’ and its interpretation…like stories that eye can tell…a ‘heart-to-heart’ poetry..thanks Sir Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10

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Shashendra Amalshan 03 September 2009

Hey I agree to this! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Only a woman can/. cause I kinda know this feeling.. Hey I will quote you a song I know! ! ! Only a woman can by Brain Macfadden I wasn’t perfect I’ve done a lot of stupid things Still no angel I wasn’t looking for forgiveness Wasn’t laid out by my pride Shocked by her attention And someone signed me up for love I didn’t want it And now I can’t live without it She changed my life She cleaned me up She found my heart Like only a woman can She pulls me up When she knows I’m sad She knows her man Like only a woman can She’s kind of perfect She’s kind of everything I’m not Yeah, she’s an angel And it’s amazing how she’s patient Even more at times I’m not She’s my conscience And who decided I’d be hers I wanna hate them Cos now I can’t live without her She changed my life She cleaned me up She found my heart Like only a woman can She pulls me up When she knows I’m sad She knows her man Like only a woman can Like only a woman can And who decided I’d be hers I wanna hate them Cos now I can’t live without her Oh, and she changed my life She cleaned me up She found my heart Like only a woman can She pulls me up When she knows I’m sad She knows her man Like only a woman can Like only a woman can Like only a woman can Like only a woman Like only a woman can Yet, the case is woman can make your life miserable too, I mean woman can even make a man run like a crazy, headless chicken, that is what Gorden Wilkinson said after he read one of my poems... But I know, only a woman can, nice to read.. lv shan

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 03 September 2009

for a woman can bring out the feelings that he never knew she can take away the sadness and heartaches he may have gone through. to make him feel he can confide in you. 'this is what a woman can do'. it is million rupee question and no one can answer it as truth prevail is so spremeand high that it can not judged. woman is allt here for our success in the form of mother.daughter.siters and they all play significant role...i loved the them and write....10

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Michelle Kafka 03 September 2009

An exquisite write. Thanks for sharing.

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Kranthi Pothineni 31 August 2009

Friend what about the other side. Wish to see you draft it too. Nice and interesting lines to ponder.

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 30 August 2009

very true to the last world...god has made woman differently

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