What A Way To Go! Comments

it seems every one of four poems i've looked at are ones i've already commented on. i like this one AGAIN! ! i may use this in an upcoming showcase 'about funny', even if it isn't terrible funny. ha ha. bri (:

favorite line: But right now, I just wish you'd go away! ...............a tiny laugh here. haven't i heard that before? well, married 4 times, i've at least heard it three times! ! I Love this one! don't let any punk talk you into believing your poems are trash. don't! ! ! Brian Johnston took a poetry course at Stanford (in his 70s) and said 'they' said rhyming is not the in thing now. screw them! ! i like how you managed to rhyme EACH line. of course 19? lines ended in the word way. ha ha. bri :) one more before i get booted off for a few hours today.

DONE! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ;) bri but first, i added it to MyPoemList. way cool!