Tuesday, August 30, 2005

' What A Waste ' Comments

Rating: ★2.8

She walked towards me down our street
my fluttering heart missed a beat
My throat went dry I felt oh so shy
and my knees began to knock
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Gordon Whittaker
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.............. ......................... 16 January 2006

I liked this very much too. I would have titled it What a waist and changed the last line to But my god, what a waist, what a waste, of waist.

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Kelly Allen Vinal 30 August 2005

No waste in this verse. Good work!

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Mary Nagy 30 August 2005

Very funny one Gordon! Made me laugh. Thanks. Sincerely, Mary

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Gordon Whittaker

Gordon Whittaker

Bolton Lancashire England
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Bolton Lancashire England
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