What A Waste Comments

somehow i managed to notice what you spelled out with the first words of lines; i would have missed it without the capitalization. cute and clever. i enjoyed your biography and this first poem of yours which i just read. i'm glad you felt comfortable continuing sentences into succeeding lines, and the punctuation was even correct! well, i did read that you get good grades i think. hopefully you don't think life is a waste, and hopefully you don't have the need to duck too often. but, yes, life can be (maybe always is, in the 'greater scheme of things') trivial. i wish you success and happiness. thanks for sharing. i sent this to my poemlist.