Wednesday, November 22, 2017

What A Soul Is? Comments

Rating: 5.0

I don't know how but I'll be burning in heaven
Meanwhile we stay here to try to up his level
And we can lay down to make the pain go away
But let's not forget that we can fail to the fate
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Jacqueline Palacio
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Cynthia Buhain-baello 27 January 2018

Interesting poem about burning in heaven and then all the angst and darkness of a lost soul. It does not answer what a souls is but goes into the depths of pain and a cursed state.

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Jacqueline Palacio 27 January 2018

I could say it's expressing frustration from being lost so yeah, thanks for the feedback.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 22 November 2017

Such an interesting poem, Jacqueline...10++++

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Jacqueline Palacio 27 January 2018

I am just starting writing poetry so thank you.

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