Friday, July 24, 2015

What A Painful Parting Comments

Rating: 4.0

What a painful parting
After hours and hours of waiting
Followed by hours and hours of hearing
Unrefined songs from minibus touts
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William Mpina
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Chinedu Dike 27 July 2015

Lovely narrative poem, depicting painful separation of a doting aunty and a well loved nephew. A well articulated piece of poetry nicely penned from the heart. A good one indeed. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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