Tuesday, March 27, 2018

What A Lovely Heart Comments

Rating: 5.0

"From clouds to clouds from showers to showers
From seasons to seasons from flowers to flowers
From gardens to gardens from greenery to greenery
From colors to colors from scenery to scenery
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Rose Marie Juan-austin 28 March 2018

A beautiful poem elegantly penned. It touches many issues, to wit; God's wisdom, the wonders of nature and ageing. It is partly poignant write but it is full of hope that we could feel in the last stanza, the heartbeat of the poem. Beautiful lines that touch the very core.of the heart. Amazing piece.10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 28 March 2018

From birds to birds from wings to wings From Moon to Venus from Venus to Moon From Heaven to Heaven from Boon to Boon From lips to lips I sucked beauty wherever I got But the slow rusting of my ageing, I forgot! ..........fantastic, really fantastic expression you have made dear Akhtarji from your core of heart. Enjoyed. Thanks.

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Rini Shibu 28 March 2018

From days to nights from nights to days My charms vanish and my beaut decays..all have t go through this stage

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Khalida Bano Ali 28 March 2018

A wonderful poem, Look into your bosom there's a work of art, Touching beauty of love! What a lovely heart!

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Nudershada Cabanes 28 March 2018

What a lovely poem Sir Akhtar. Written from the core of a lovely heart.10

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