Thursday, November 28, 2019

What A Life! Comments

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Sometimes, we knowingly lose
The addresses of our dear people

we leave behind
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Bharati Nayak
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Rob Lamberton 15 February 2023

I've discovered that wonder. It is full of surprise!

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We leave behind the relations of the past and keep them treasured in the remote corner of our heart. When life suffocates inside we pretend to live happy. Deeply emotional poignant write about life.

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Anjandev Roy 05 January 2020

Such a wonderful poem. Thank u, dear poetess. anjandev roy.

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Unwritten Soul 02 January 2020

Nice one, but maybe we shouldnt pretend because we cant lie to self, if truly our dear people deserve to know from heart, we may just act fine to calm them but at same time to share. Because love to each other in community is like a long chain. Yes life composed of smile and down, it challenges us emotionally but every challenge it do something to us. Depend on the reaction we to it, life not mean simple but a complex one. Love and care ease it well.

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Edward Kofi Louis 24 December 2019

What is life? ! When, we pretend to be happy and, Live in bitter tears. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Muhammad Ali 11 December 2019

Hi. Shockingly real. Bitter and pity. Wow what a wonder.. Are beautiful expressions to end this fine poem.

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Valsa George 08 December 2019

Life can turn very mysterious sometimes. Though we still love many who have been very intimate to us earlier, we don't get enough time to be in contact with them in our busy and hectic life. Life is challenging with unexpected turns and twists and we put on a brave face though in our heart of hearts we may be silently sobbing. A beautiful poem that brings out the stark realities of life.

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Nice and melodious expression, thank you Poet.

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Aniruddha Pathak 08 December 2019

We drink the bitter tears And wear a sweet smile... Fascinating expression on the complexities and contradictions of life. And with all the troubles of life we still haply live it and like to return.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 07 December 2019

life is seasonal some love autumns many SPRINGS what you do is your own decision you also are unique

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Savita Tyagi 05 December 2019

Great poem. Yes life is full of wonder and riddles. We are really lucky to be able to live through and express in in our words.

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Susan Williams 02 December 2019

You have such a fearless appreciation of the complexities of life- -you are the beating heart of poetry, Bharati! 10+++++++++++++++++++++++ and onto my fav list

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Kumarmani Mahakul 02 December 2019

The nature and life of the present people from past is something different and wonderful. Some people knowingly ignore the addresses of dear people and in spite of bitter tear they coax smiling. This life is so wonderful. A brilliant poem is astutely composed by you dear madam, thanks for sharing.

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Akhtar Jawad 30 November 2019

Life has so many weathers, but we live waiting for the springs.

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Sekharan Pookkat 29 November 2019

Life is wonderful to hide and seek the treasures, measures as well as lost memories in real life.

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Bharati Nayak 29 November 2019

Thank you Sekharan Pookkat for coming to read my poem and your appreciation.

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Kostas Lagos 28 November 2019

The bittersweet taste of life. Lovely!

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Bharati Nayak 29 November 2019

Thank you Kostas Lagos for your appreciation.

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