Sunday, May 24, 2009

What A Girl Wants Comments

Rating: 5.0

to find that special someone
with him 'to be one'
isn't this what every girl wants
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Beena Jal
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so lovely poem...10 Above and all she wants respective call not from any other angle she wants her man to be simple and single

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Afzal Shauq 31 May 2010

wonderful..each stanza is meaningful enough.. I really enjoyed these stanzas and the hidden meainings inside.. lovey poet you are..

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Zaibar Zee 05 December 2009

Nice piece of work, … your notion, also helps a man to understand a woman perspective of life and love.

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Vijay Sai R 19 November 2009

a captivating piece!

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Marieta Maglas 16 November 2009

my husband says to me you are my life, pretty nice confessional poem 10++

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some insight into what women really want, though i never understood what mine wanted.

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A . 23 July 2009

Nice! !

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Ashraful Musaddeq 24 May 2009

Pretty composition,10++

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Saadat Tahir 24 May 2009

very nice poem syeda the format is rather novel three threes followed by a string of twos but there is dynamism in novelty.... i wish you well in your endeavour the poem is pretty good and yes... THe questions every normal girl asks nicely put cheers

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Beena Jal

Beena Jal

Rawalpindi, Pakistan
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