Saturday, March 29, 2014

What A Dilemma! Comments

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y hard running breath
Competes with the storm
That you caused in my life
By your lightening appearance
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V P Mahur
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Valsa George 29 March 2014

This going out of breath and shivering of hands at the sight of someone is called 'love'! ....... So a spark has fallen somewhere... Mahur! Will it grow into a flame? ..... But never allow it to consume you entirely! (Joking) A very passionate write! Thank you for your comment on my 300th poem!

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Siyana (UP) , Bulandshahr, India
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