Wednesday, July 5, 2023

What A Destiny Of Cigarette Butts Comments

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From lip to the gutter, what a destiny of cigarette butts,
little round discs, like little round butts.

They're thrown away without thought, without care,
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Sheeya Hacks
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Nabakishore Dash 07 July 2023

Last two lines are very true dear SH.

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Nosheen Irfan 06 July 2023

Nice witty poem. Enjoyed reading. Great sense of humour.

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M. Asim Nehal 06 July 2023

I am just trying to imagine how would anyone look without BUTTS....We sit to relax on it. For while cigarette butts may be repulsive and mundane, but our butts bring laughter and joy, without shame.

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M. Asim Nehal 06 July 2023

Secsond Stanza is wonderful, We always prefer to wear fresh UG after a bath and then throw it away during night without care, ignoring the fact that it helped to cover our shame....

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M. Asim Nehal 06 July 2023

Profound poem with a humorous touch. I see underlined philosophy of life when you say 'From lip to the gutter' Yes Fate of a Cigar/ Ciggerettes.

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Hmm, humor enjoyed

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Bri Edwards 06 July 2023

Gee, Sheeya, this poem should ONLY be read by 'mature audiences'! ! ! How WAS I allowed to read it! ! ! ! ? ? Answer me THAT! bri ;)

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Ricky M 05 July 2023

A poem one of its kind. Brilliantly explained the Butts....Both I mean.

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