Sunday, January 24, 2016

What A Day? ? ? Comments

Rating: 4.8

I was elated and the whole throng,
Girls were clamourning a cheers song.
We frabjously watching the cricket match,
One after one enjoyed the defenders catch..
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Randhir kaur
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Siddartha Montik 12 January 2017

the joy and pain of a sport Event. well expressed with. fulll heart. enjoyed reading the lines. and. expression. with heart.! ! thank you poet.! !

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Edward Kofi Louis 14 September 2016

Clamourning a cheer song! ! Nice piece of work.

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Randhir Kaur 10 July 2016

Thank you Kaul Sir. Peace.

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Tribhawan Kaul 10 July 2016

A vibrant with a nostalgic touch...lovely.

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Randhir Kaur 17 June 2016

Many many thanks Rajnish Manga, Sk Nurul Huda, Unnikrishnan ES for your warm felicitation. Peace to hear such words. Keep reading. Stay connected.

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Rajnish Manga 15 June 2016

Amazing poem with a captivating narrative that brings about the joy and emotion of the Sports Day at college. Thanks for sharing the poem and Congrats for its being selected as 'Poem of the Day'.

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B.m. Biswas 14 June 2016

great.....first of all congratulation for being member poet... don't think....you will win the final match of your life...... a real poet you are...

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Unnikrishnan E S 14 June 2016

Randhir, You carried me back to my good old school/college days. Thank you. And many congrats on being selected as the poet of the day.

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Randhir Kaur 14 June 2016

Thank you Savita.. I am glad you liked it..Stay updated.

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Randhir Kaur 14 June 2016

Thanks Ratnakar for your warm wishes..It means a lot dear...Keep reading.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 14 June 2016

Spontaneous flow of youthful anxiety and emotions has made this poem inspirational and great. Heartiest Congrats for composing it as also on it's selection as member poem of the Day.

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Savita Tyagi 14 June 2016

Great poem. Loved the enthusiasm and vibrancy.

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Randhir Kaur 14 June 2016

Hahaaaahaa...Well taken Tom. Thanks for reading.

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Tom Billsborough 14 June 2016

Lost and found! Reminds me so much of School Events. Very well written and funny too! Tom Billsborough

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Randhir Kaur 14 June 2016

Packet full of thank you's Jayatissa. Peace. Stay connected.

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Jayatissa K. Liyanage 14 June 2016

College matches are the greatest memorable events in that life. Wonderful write. Congrats on your achievement. X

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Randhir Kaur 14 June 2016

Thank you Evensong, Soul Watcher, Kelly Kurt, Mohammed Asim Nehal, Kim Barney and Kishore Kumar Das for your lovely kind words. I am just overwhelmed and cannot explain my happiness. This is possible all because of your love and support, for your respect and appreciation. I love writing, I am not a poet but you all made me so. Ever many thanks to each and everyone. Loads of love and hugs. Stay tuned.

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Soul Watcher 14 June 2016

Well done Randhir, , congratulations to be poet of the day

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Kelly Kurt 14 June 2016

A memory that I hope lasts a lifetime.

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M Asim Nehal 14 June 2016

Memories are hard to erase, Wonderful poem, Randhirji...Loved it.10

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