Tuesday, June 9, 2020

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Write a poem
that refuses to rhyme and no one will read it.
Pen poetry that makes no sense,
but rhymes every line, and
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Smoky Hoss
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Varsha M 06 January 2021

Its oksy to pen what only you understand...for this bis your art and your creativity....its others fault that they don't make sense to them

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Sandra Feldman 30 December 2020

poems, I've ever heard.

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Sandra Feldman 30 December 2020

Oh, what truthful Fun this poem is

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Kim Barney 30 December 2020

A rhyme is fine, as long as it's mine. And here's something true: I like yours too.

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Glen Kappy 29 July 2020

To rhyme or not to rhyme, that is the question. For decades now I’ve had the conviction that the form and content of a poem should fit its function. Rhyme is one of a few helpful memory devices. But, as you allude to, some abandon sense to make a poem rhyme. -Glen

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Kim Barney 30 December 2020

So true, Glen. Some poems make no sense at all but have good rhymes!

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Lawerence Mize 23 June 2020

Makes you wonder.Good one Smoky.

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Susan Williams 15 June 2020

I enjoyed this conversational poem about poetry and give it a 10++++++++++++ for courage above the call of duty! ! !

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Susan Williams 15 June 2020

I am absolved! ! I cannot write a poem that end-rhymes and makes sense. I find it hard to write smooth lines that rhyme and have significance I have a friend who end-rhymes her faith poems and they sing! ! ! I swear she must talk in rhyme to sound that natural. I have tried writing in a rigid formula like a sonnet but I cannot say I enjoyed the experience and I doubt many enjoyed the reading of it. But it is fun to experiment! Otherwise, write in freedom, .

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