Wet Shoes Comments

What did you think when you wrote it

Ashish I love the simplicity of this short and simple poem! So much packed into this poem...many emotions and easy to see imagery! You write well and I wish to see you write more soon! ((Smile)) Hope your not too homesick anymore. Take care of U.................... =Shelley=

Fab! What a lovely simple poem that hooks you in, sad and touching and poignant all at once! Well Done!

This is truly excellent, Ashish. I loved the way it kept me hanging on to find out who the person was in wet shoes and in the end it became irrelevent, overtaken by a very sensitive human touch. Excellent. Good luck with it. Patrick

Very good sense og poetry Ashish...have to learn that from you now :) Btw thanks for your comment on my poem Mehmaan/guest! Preets

wow great poem reminds me of pictures by a Quebec painter long ago, one of my favorite artists.

One moment of truth in a million lies...theme is just great...i think you have deep perception of feelings...keep it up...great going...love...nalini