Tuesday, March 7, 2006

Wet Nurse Comments

Rating: 5.0

She came with an umbrella
but there is no rain at all.
My lonely heart is longing for a shelter
and she gave me the umbrella.
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nimal dunuhinga
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Brian Dorn 18 March 2007

Short but symbolically potent. Great stuff, Nimal... really, a great poem! Brian

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Sandra Fowler 09 March 2006

This is an exceptionally caring little poem. We all need a compassionate friend with an umbrella sometimes. Kindest regards, Sandra

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Charles Chaim Wax 07 March 2006

a delightful narrative of compassion and luck and the yearning in the heart to free all from pain not possible but still the yearning to do so a fine poem

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nimal dunuhinga

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kalubovila East, Sri Lanka
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