Wednesday, July 29, 2015

Wet Night Shower Of A Rose Comments

Rating: 5.0

Not touched by the wind is the bud of rose,
Not yet exposed to the warm sunlight,
When took a shower of dew one night,
The heart found a pinkish flower so close,
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Akhtar Jawad
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Edward Kofi Louis 31 July 2015

Soft petals of love. Nice work.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 30 July 2015

You are also a bud destined to blossom, To become a lovely beautiful flower, You’ll have to take a wet night shower. ..... so nicely envisioned.A lovely poem indeed10......

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Valsa George 30 July 2015

You are also a bud destined to blossom, To become a lovely beautiful flower, You’ll have to take a wet night shower................ A lovely message and a beautiful tribute to a rose flower! I can visualize this rose, wet in the night shower in dew! A 10

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Khalid Saifullah 30 July 2015

An amazing poem a piece of beauty........................10

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Maylian Leo 29 July 2015

Beautiful verse, graceful, too.

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Kelly Kurt 29 July 2015

I wish that I could write a poem as magnificent as this one, Akhtar. You have done the rose and poetry a great service. A definite 10 and going on my favorite poems list. Thank you!

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Michael Joseph 29 July 2015

Akhtar, this poem is among the best I have ever read! You did a marvelous job. Is it a rose flower or it’s His face? Simply beautiful! ! A 10

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