Thursday, November 10, 2011

Wet Dream Comments

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Fallen past the realities of a dream,
I fall into the bosom of a sultry goddess,
One whom's sexed aroma arouses more than thoughts,
Crimson fingers tangle in the hair of love,
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Crimson Love
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Harindhar Reddy 12 November 2011

your usage of word sexed just like Shakespeare created words you are giving fresh dimension to the words - it like that's why! Hello Jacqui is 100% when she attributed your poem as promiscuous. I say the very promiscuous poem! Well done - decent Job! Also see my new word coined by for the purpose of explaining a fingerling in poem Oh Darling! A Tenderling! Solo Fingerling - A Fish Baths In Turbulent Life-Ring!

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Jacqui Broad 11 November 2011

:) . The title speaks for itself... One can't blame you for being so passionate, what with Italian blood running through your veins! Very promiscuous poem...

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