Tuesday, March 7, 2006

Western (For The Girl I Love) Comments

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Thursday morning, sweep the dawn in
You're over the fields of Saskatchewan.
I miss you like a city, like a long-lost limb.
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Eden Sheffroth 29 March 2006

WOW! Pat you are really good! ! I was really impressed by all your stuff but this poem has to be my favorite. It is so sad and so touching /i cant even describe it. She is some lucky girl to have a guy like u writing such beautiful things about her! Im gonna try setting something up so you can see my stuff too but I don't think it can compare to yours. Keep up the writing! Eden

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C-murder McMurder 15 March 2006

Great poem pat. You love that girl some lot.

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