Tuesday, October 13, 2015

Westering Sun Comments

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Westering sun like our life is too near to horizon,
Waist not your valuable time, accept right provision.
Whack your despondency it is eleventh moment,
Wheedle don’t, life wheel is too fast in movement.
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Kumarmani Mahakul
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Mihaela Pirjol 03 December 2018

''Welcome to divine qualities like truth, nonviolence, peace, Wend to earn knowledge, sympathy, co-operation, never miss. Wenches are your sisters respect them and love them, Wholly you perform your work always with good aim.'' - Powerful verses with a profound love for wisdom!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 11 December 2016

picture of Rohan ******* xlovely write again dear sir.. good morning.. 15 Oct 2015 by Rohan ******* | Reply picture of sunprincess ♡ ♡ ♡ x........amazing poem....I agree life is too short, and seems as if the older we become...the faster life goes, or maybe this is only my perception ★ 15 Oct 2015 by sunprincess ♡ ♡ ♡ | Reply picture of Catherine Flaherty xI like the W pattern it makes the poem interesting 15 Oct 2015 by Catherine Flaherty | Reply picture of eleanor prince xI like the essence of your poem - to live life authentically in a worthwhile and honourable manner - good work! 19 Oct 2015 by eleanor prince | Reply

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Edward Kofi Louis 15 October 2015

Righteous deeds are what the Creartor wants from us. Thanks for sharing.

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Sanjukta Nag 14 October 2015

Waves of W-words. Wisdom is working widely. Wonderful.

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Loke Kok Yee 14 October 2015

Timely advice to a lost soul like me! Thanks for sharing.

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Kelly Kurt 13 October 2015

Inspirational. Gives hope and peace. Thanks

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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 13 October 2015

Whole-hearted person you should be, deliberately do work, Whole day you link with God, he will remove your murk. Wholesome life you will have, you can overcome westering sun, Whatever the darkness would be, it must be bright morn. Verily, a lovely poem with each line with a w. The westering sun gives the warning of an ending day to calculate what is left to be done and also gives the happy tidings of a new dawn. Loved reading and commenting.......10

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M Asim Nehal 13 October 2015

Wonderful, Wise, Wisdom all packed in your poem perfectly.Loved it sir.

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