Were You There? Comments

Simply loved it what touches heart. Listening whispers of beloved....... wonderful.

Wow what a beautiful imagery woven here in this wonderful write! I loved it.

your words whisper in heart heather. as always a wonderful piece. :)

So soft are your memories that is can not be real. A path between your mind and your heart!

A rare display of feelings....intervened with imagery. Heather I take U my teachers as u always inspire me with poetic words. Simple superb!

Heather God knows imagination or presence or both, but there is something happening there at your garden and same felt by David and too have the feeling even I can have the smell many a time I spoke ..silence but the smell love this thank Heather

Very nice poem, Heather. Is it just wishful thinking? We'll never know, but I like to think these feelings are real.

A great rhyming pattern. Your usual brevity says all that is needed

Maybe presence on display. Beautiful poem.

I often feel this about my late wife. Lovely write.

When our mind is lost in the memories of someone dear, we feel that he/ she is standing before us.... something of an optical illusion! A beautiful poem, Heather! Enjoyed its simple beauty!

When our mind is lost in the memories of someone dear, we feel that he/ she is standing before us.... something of an optical illusion! A beautiful poem, Heather! Enjoyed its simple beauty!

A great poem, I think loved ones will always be there watching over us.