Thursday, May 11, 2006

Were You There? Comments

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You left my life but were you still there?
When I needed some guidance and someone to care.
Within my heart you warmed my soul
As my faith went slipping down a black hole
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Lisa Cresswell Wilkinson
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Brandi Bouie 31 May 2006

I enjoyed reading your poem too. Your poem says everything that I feel about my dad but still find it hard to say. Thank you for sharing it with me.

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Jerry Hughes 25 May 2006

A lovely tribute to your father, Lisa. I relate...

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Tracey Collins 15 May 2006

yes I really like that, I felt the same way I didn`t think my dad was thier after he died, but he was watching over me all the time.

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Lisa Cresswell Wilkinson

Lisa Cresswell Wilkinson

Northumberland, England
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