Thursday, June 21, 2018

Were You Like The Old Wine Comments

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Were you like the old wine

Were you like the old wine,
That all do yearn and thirst,
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Riza Braholli
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Me Poet Yeps Poet 05 July 2018

excellent picture of now an old woman when much younger much fresher....fresher beautiful description of a younger gal as she ages the lower dresses the wine is still sweet but not as much as it was when younger she was but we all love to drink wine ere we enter our destined shrine let me have a last sip of thine red lovely wine really life's divine help me with some more wine

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 05 July 2018

beautiful description of a younger gal as she ages the lower dresses the wine is still sweet but not as much as it was when younger she was but we all love to drink wine ere we enter our destined shrine let me have a last sip of thine red lovely wine really life's divine help me with some more wine

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riza braholli 06 July 2018

thank you poet poet. dr. riza

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Aqua Flower 28 June 2018

This is an interesting piece on love....love changes with age and time. I like how you used wine to deliciousy describe love in a romantic way! Beautiful! Aged wine is better :)

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Riza Braholli 29 June 2018

Aqua, are two poems for old wine: one is what you read and the other Older wine I think both poems make a full poetry... Thank you many poets!

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