Thursday, October 18, 2012

Were You Jealous Comments

Rating: 5.0

..O wicked creature of gossamer wing...
..sashaying by that night i heard you sing....
..you tiny monster how cunningly did you fly..
..that night i saw the murderous, bloodthirsty look in your eye..
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Rigzin Namgyal
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Marvin Brato 24 October 2013

Interesting sentiments...thought provoking!

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Payal Parande 12 February 2013

splendid indeed the whole time i felt like i was watching some old time horror movie and i love old movies so thank you for the experience ..again bravo

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Valerie Dohren 06 February 2013

Great write, very descriptive.

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Adeline Foster 22 December 2012

Good poem. Read mine - Indebted - Adeline

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Vipins Puthooran 19 December 2012

'Tis a good write topo markss

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Indira Babbellapati 19 December 2012

it's indeed amazing with all the features of a murder mystery...

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Persian Khushi 17 December 2012

very powerful, great imagery. excellently composed.

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Romeo Della Valle 16 December 2012

Deep and Powerful! A well elaborated and crafted write that clearly shows your great abilities and thinking power to interpret your experience! Awesome! Jealousy: the root of all evils! 19+++ Thank you for sharing and keep it up! God Bless You! Romeo-New York City

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Neetha Sasidharan 15 December 2012

wow...hats off...grt comparisons...nice imaginations...gtr rhymes...kp going

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Persian Khushi 20 November 2012

remarkable! amazing! super! ! you are an excellent poet.

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Neela Nath Das 23 October 2012

Full of metaphors, imagery. Loved the central thought. Jealousy makes man mad.The allegorical veil is very nice. Undoubtedly, a beautiful poem!

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Babatunde Aremu 19 October 2012

Jealousy is devilish as vividly describe in this poem. Good message, I like it

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