..O wicked creature of gossamer wing...
..sashaying by that night i heard you sing....
..you tiny monster how cunningly did you fly..
..that night i saw the murderous, bloodthirsty look in your eye..
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splendid indeed the whole time i felt like i was watching some old time horror movie and i love old movies so thank you for the experience ..again bravo
it's indeed amazing with all the features of a murder mystery...
Deep and Powerful! A well elaborated and crafted write that clearly shows your great abilities and thinking power to interpret your experience! Awesome! Jealousy: the root of all evils! 19+++ Thank you for sharing and keep it up! God Bless You! Romeo-New York City
wow...hats off...grt comparisons...nice imaginations...gtr rhymes...kp going
Full of metaphors, imagery. Loved the central thought. Jealousy makes man mad.The allegorical veil is very nice. Undoubtedly, a beautiful poem!
Jealousy is devilish as vividly describe in this poem. Good message, I like it
Interesting sentiments...thought provoking!