Tuesday, July 31, 2007

Were You Afraid I Would Leave You Behind? Comments

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You have spent a lifetime...
Trying to prevent my progress.
And the only thing you have displayed,
Is a willfulness to degrade yourself.
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Lawrence S. Pertillar
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Marci Made 31 July 2007

I'm seeing here, hope I'm getting it right, a struggle with our inner selves....never quite sure if we've chosen the right path.......anyhow, it's an excellent write...sometimes, most times to be truthful, it's hard to leave 'pieces' of ourselves behind.....~~~love, marci.xo

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Evaughn Gray 31 July 2007

that's a very good poem i liked it i give it a ten! your a very good writer~hazel

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shadow boxing with the alter ego of ones consciousness is another tough one to play by the ear.. very alarming introspection.. of ones self...

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Lawrence S. Pertillar

Lawrence S. Pertillar

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