Friday, January 31, 2014

Were There Five? Comments

Rating: 4.6

There were four high pines, straight, that branched out

over the hedge with holes.
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Francie Lynch
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Gordon Gilhuly 25 June 2017

Delightful poem, Francie. Reminded me of my grandparents' farm; the trees there were poplar - a small difference - but you managed to take me back there so easily. You know, lad, I'm beginning to quite enjoy your poetry. Thanks.

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Nice poem about taking down a tree in a park..so sad to see a tree being removed..no home for birds or squirrels.. congratulations on being selected for poem of the day..

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Francie Lynch 21 April 2017

You must have read the wrong poem. Mine's about being trapped and the wish for escape. No trees were harmed.

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Tom Allport 21 April 2017

a good descriptive poem of what sounds like a homely place? ........well written.

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Edward Kofi Louis 21 April 2017

Over the hedge! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 21 April 2017

Green lawns..... congrats on being selected....

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Kim Barney 21 April 2017

Congratulations, Francie, on poem of the day! A fascinating poem.

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Francie Lynch 21 April 2017

Thanks, Kim.

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Francie Lynch

Francie Lynch

Monaghan, Ireland
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