We want to know about our future,
But changing thoughts is quite a horror task.
We`re looking for unusual clumsy feature
And just for fun about angels ask.
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People say radium is the most powerful substance but a glimpse at this poems shows poetry is also efficacious. The way you addressed with the problem with out any dress make you a fantabulous poet! Bingo! I can see our speech in this poem. Yes! Sometimes life become weary and unbearable then life peters out of us. Then we believe in miracles! Anyway, you belong to the mighty clan of mystic poets - tick! tick! 100/100 + a big high five!
well said and well crafted, every line of the poem is full of wisdom.
A stunning poem! Like lightening from a clear blue sky! Such is the impact of the beautful inspiring message! You are a marvelous poet.