Tuesday, October 16, 2018

Were I To Lose Her Now Comments

Rating: 4.4

I met an old man
he ought to know
and he said,
"If you love her let her go."
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Adrian Flett
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Unnikrishnan E S 28 February 2022

" stubborn cerebral lobe " … it is easy to say, "if you love her, let her go"… but Love does not heed this advice… Gossamer memories linger.. wonderful poem on love and separation!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 03 March 2020

Dear Adrian, A CLASSIC poem resonates perpetually, so true, that's why I add this now to MyPoemList, thank you so much for having created this Classic (in my very eyes, sure!) poem, Adrian, I so admired the words in this Immortal poem. Thank you so much that I have known you through PoemHunter. God's Blessings in Abundance.

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Chinedu Dike 22 November 2019

Well expressed thoughts and feelings. An insightful piece of poetry nicely brought forth from the heart. Thanks for sharing, Adrian.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 07 November 2019

A beautiful poem is well executed. Thanks and congratulation for being selected this poem as the member poem of the poem of day

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Bill Cantrell 07 November 2019

Wow, emotions intertwined in verse after verse, a very beautiful poem! ! Congratulations for worthy poem of the day!

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Savita Tyagi 07 November 2019

Marvelous poem with amazing imagery. Pleasure of a loved one’s presence is felt in small things.

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Tamara Beryl Latham 07 November 2019

Each of us has his or her own way of expressing love with the poetic pen. Yours is unique. Thanks for sharing and congratulations on POD. : -)

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Anil Kumar Panda 07 November 2019

This is awesome write. Very clever use of words giving the poem a smooth flow. Loved it and congrats. 'But she is here; in her scent of neck hair nose buried deep safe to quell the sheer gut twisting fear.'.. is so beautiful.

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Harley White 07 November 2019

Strong poetic imagery well expressed...

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Dr Antony Theodore 07 November 2019

ut she is here; in her scent of neck hair nose buried deep safe to quell the sheer gut twisting fear... drems in love. a fine poem. tony

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Sylvia Frances Chan 07 November 2019

A mesmerizing poem, so loveliest worded. This poem reminds me of my fav. poet Keats. He wrote: A Thing of Beauty is a Joy Forever, , so absolutely right. This is the second time your poem is chosen as The Member Poem Of The Day, Adrian! Congratulations with this honour. A 10 Full score and a myriad of 10's more you so well deserved

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Adrian Flett 08 November 2019

Thanks Sylvia. I'm glad you remembered and enjpyed it again.

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Adrian Flett 08 November 2019

Thanks Sylvia, I'm glad you enjoyed it again.

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Mahtab Bangalee 07 November 2019

Her golden gossamer threads out and out, float in space bind me secure/// love there is love in safe, in fair, in sweet dream of life total secured!

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Rebecca Navarre 19 February 2019

Powerfully moving, painted with such depth and heart! .. Ever so very many 10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ...................+++++

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Adrian Flett 20 February 2019

Rebecca I appreciate your comments and thanks for them. It is encouraging to know what other poets think of what we do.

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Prabir Gayen 15 February 2019

Beautiful poem dear poet...... thanks

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Adrian Flett 15 February 2019

Thanks Prabir for reading and enjoying the poem

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Valentin Savin 28 January 2019

Well thought and written. Thanks for sharing.

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Adrian Flett 29 January 2019

Thanks Savin I appreciate your thoughts and comments.

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Prabir Gayen 02 January 2019

Fine poem dear poet................

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Adrian Flett 02 January 2019

Thanks for your comment Prabir

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Nadia Umber Lodhi 07 November 2018

man he ought to know and he said, If you love her let her go.

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Adrian Flett 08 November 2018

Thanks for reading, Hadia

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 07 November 2018

One of the best poems I have ever read that vividly depicted love and loss of love. Very touching and mesmerizing lines that touched the core of the heart. The penultimate and final stanzas are very moving. 10 and on to my Poem List. Congratulations for a well deserved POD.

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Adrian Flett 08 November 2018

Rose thanks for your comments

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Fiadh Fida 07 November 2018

gut twisting fear. thanks for sharing the poem with us

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Adrian Flett 08 November 2018

Hi Fiadh thank you for your response

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Edward Kofi Louis 07 November 2018

But she is here! ! There with her muse. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Adrian Flett 08 November 2018

Hi Edward and thanks for reading the poem

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