! ! Were I In Heaven, We'D Be Able To Dance Together! ! Comments

a touching wish...! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

Really fantastic and throbing.

beautiful my brother. absolutely

'All of our trance, won't ever end Until we can dance, together again' wonderful lines..............

Reads like a dance of love

Wonderful and delightful.. Nice Krista

beautiful... made me to read again and again...good

good poem, Kite...pleasing verses...i liked...10

I think this is good poem...good job

wonderful poem nicely write i really enjoyed

fantastic piece great to read- keeps reader interested :)