The second poetess good she is
Sun is the centre stage of life...morning -dawn- evening twilight...the sun does rise- - it never sets... it's for ever rising....some where.The centre of our universe and also us..
is the Sun...
we must converse...as the sun leads us from the distant hill...from where it emerges... till its zenith......
then it sets for us only...in our distant horizon...
O poet you will be one day like the sun....
when poetry of great poets is being sung.
Hopefully
I will be along too... with you...ere the setting sun...in the distant horizon...poet well done
You already are well sung! I am fascinated by the way you write.
I have lived submerged in poetry all my life
but have never encountered any Poet like yourself.
You are refreshingly and genuinely different!
In a very positive way.
A POETESS SAYS
''You're deep and yet you flow
How many more secrets do you know?
Your first poem reminds me of the classic cult film
Harold and Maude.
It was bittersweet just like your wonderful poem.
Your second poem reminds me of
Unwritten Soul.
Suffice it to say, your title says it all.
2.POET SAYS
On a final note,
I'm in total agreement with Sandra
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
....1. A vision of the past...A vision for the future! Well done, Poet! Well done! 4. A vision of the past...A vision for the future! Well done, Poet! Well done! (Report) Yeah, it is true. Very nicely done. You are a great poet indeed