Went Deep Into The Fathomless Poem by me poet yeps poet

Went Deep Into The Fathomless



The second poetess good she is

Sun is the centre stage of life...morning -dawn- evening twilight...the sun does rise- - it never sets... it's for ever rising....some where.The centre of our universe and also us..
is the Sun...
we must converse...as the sun leads us from the distant hill...from where it emerges... till its zenith......
then it sets for us only...in our distant horizon...

O poet you will be one day like the sun....
when poetry of great poets is being sung.
Hopefully
I will be along too... with you...ere the setting sun...in the distant horizon...poet well done

You already are well sung! I am fascinated by the way you write.
I have lived submerged in poetry all my life
but have never encountered any Poet like yourself.
You are refreshingly and genuinely different!
In a very positive way.

A POETESS SAYS
''You're deep and yet you flow
How many more secrets do you know?
Your first poem reminds me of the classic cult film
Harold and Maude.
It was bittersweet just like your wonderful poem.

Your second poem reminds me of
Unwritten Soul.
Suffice it to say, your title says it all.


2.POET SAYS
On a final note,
I'm in total agreement with Sandra

Saturday, March 21, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: poems,poetess,poetic expression,poets
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
You're deep and yet you flow
How many more secrets do you know?

AS MANY AS YOU ALL DO
MAYBE A BIT MORE
AS I use my BRAINS MAINLY
RIGHT OR WRONG
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Me Poet Yeps Poet 21 March 2020

....1. A vision of the past...A vision for the future! Well done, Poet! Well done! 4. A vision of the past...A vision for the future! Well done, Poet! Well done! (Report) Yeah, it is true. Very nicely done. You are a great poet indeed

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 21 March 2020

beautiful verse that this poetess must like Encore! Bravo

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Leeann Azzopardi 21 March 2020

beautiful verse that this poetess must like Encore! Bravo!

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