Thursday, March 26, 2009

Well Of Loneliness Comments

Rating: 5.0

In well of loneliness
I learned my lesson
Learned not to lessen
Learned to heal lesion
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Kranthi Pothineni
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Janell Cressman 28 March 2009

I kind of liked it, the flow was definitly good! ! ! ! ! !

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Pablo Cruise 27 March 2009

Intriguing format, Kranthi. Keep developing.

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Joseph Poewhit 27 March 2009

Poem has an interesting way of reaching for the rhyme at the end of each line. Loneliness is only a state of attitude. People usually avoid pain or uncomfortable situations, for self centered pleasure

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Louis Rams 26 March 2009

HELLS BRIGHT FIRE IS DARK WITH DESIRE FOR THE SOUL IS LOST IN THE FLAME, NEVER TO BE THE SAME. THIS POEM TAKES YOU HIGH INTO THE SKY THEN DROPS YOU DOWN QUICKLY. A GOOD WRITE

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Naidz Ladia 26 March 2009

rhyming wrds..nice to read.. naizz

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Eyan Desir 26 March 2009

Very nicea bit funny hahahaha i laugh readin this thank 10s

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this is an interesting piece.

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