Monday, May 21, 2018

Well In Time (Inspired By Current Time - Poem By Kumarmani Mahakul) Comments

Rating: 5.0

When He ordered me to pray at once,
I left the bed,
I washed my hands,
my mouth and my feet.
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Mahtab Bangalee 19 December 2018

beautiful writing on inner feelings for the great Almighty

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Susan Williams 30 May 2018

I like that title and the element of time in this piece

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A blessing is given in His own time, even if we will not ask for it. Wonderful poem. So humbling.10

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Kelly Kurt 21 May 2018

A sense of peace is within us all. A touch on the shoulder takes on significance. But I do love everyone. Especially me. : -)

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Robert Murray Smith 21 May 2018

A unique write from a unique poet.++10

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