Sunday, April 29, 2018

Well Comments

Rating: 4.9

I jumped into the well.
It was a free fall.
I got angry with myself
and jumped into the well.
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Narayanan Kutty Pozhath
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Britte Ninad 20 May 2018

light verse. nice true 10+++

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Thank you for your comments Britte Ninad.

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Hazel Durham 12 May 2018

A very wise and thought provoking write and thanks for sharing! !

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Thank you Hazel for the kind words.

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Linda Hepner 08 May 2018

You can 'see' yourself - or hear - getting angry or losing yourself, and can't stop it. But here you've grabbed the moment of instant loss.

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It is true. Thank you.

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Buxton Shippy 07 May 2018

This poem teaches us the wisdom of hanger management. Love it...10

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Thank you Buxton for the kind words.

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Rajnish Manga 29 April 2018

Nice poem. Insightful and quite like being human. Thanks.

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Thank you Rajnish.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 29 April 2018

Dear Narayanan, such a well penned poem👍👍👍

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Thank you Bernard.

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Dr Antony Theodore 29 April 2018

I got angry with myself and jumped into the well. now i cannot get out...... up to the shore........anger, reaction, uncontrollable emotions and the havocs it create. all so well portrayed here in this poem dear poet. thannk u. tony

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Thank you Dr for your time and kind words.

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Narayanan Kutty Pozhath

Narayanan Kutty Pozhath

Trissur, Kerala, India.
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