Sunday, April 7, 2019

Welcoming Dawn Comments

Rating: 5.0

For welcoming dawn time is ready,
Our city is ready, road is ready,
To preach us, our daddy is ready,
A readiness whispers to watch beauty
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Kumarmani Mahakul
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Dr Dillip K Swain 18 December 2021

A readiness whispers to embrace beauty..... great

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Susan Williams 23 November 2019

As he does for us everyday at dawn, A pure purity is poured and powered, Powdered silver is sprinkled over sky, - - - - - - - - - - you have a way with words, my friend! Has to return and read this beauty again

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Susan Williams 09 September 2019

Yes! ! ! You put your reader right there! !

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Anil Kumar Panda 30 August 2019

'God will preach us with his wisdom As he does for us everyday at dawn, A pure purity is poured and powered, Powdered silver is sprinkled over sky, '.. are lovely lines. A pure poem on dawn that gives peace and happiness. Thanks.

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Barium Muserounica 23 April 2019

Science my childhood days dawn has become my FAVORITE AND THIS HAS GREATLY MOTIVATED MIND. You have penned a beautiful poem silvery imagery you have captured has true worth. This pleases and motivates mind. We feel God's tenderness very well.

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Mj Lemon 16 April 2019

A mood captured so perfectly....anticipation is palpable. This is great work, Kumarmani.

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Nassy Fesharaki 10 April 2019

Thank you for the very clear welcoming of the dawn, which is supported with a great photo.

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Unwritten Soul 10 April 2019

And again here you are.... spelling thoughts and beautiful mind on poetry paper again.. It really a good way of welcoming new day, by positive thoughts and hopeful mind! :)

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Tom Allport 09 April 2019

A wondrous write of the welcoming dawn that starts a new day.

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Flower Prince 09 April 2019

Wow! Wow! Darling poet Kumar, tenderness is of course the gift given by God. Silvery beauty is painted in entire sky. Dawn is nature's revival of day. Thank you darling poet for sharing.

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M Asim Nehal 09 April 2019

As the streets light will switch off the sunlight will take over everything marking the beginning of a nes and fresh day. A wonderful poem on dawn.

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Edward Kofi Louis 09 April 2019

Readiness! ! ! . Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Rini shibu 08 April 2019

Daen and its beauty wonderful presented

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Heather W.B. 08 April 2019

The most powerful and calm silvery imagery of this poem nicely motivates us and we feel the beauty of this dazzling poem. You have perfectly captured the silvery moment of the nature and scenic beauty of a city street. Lovely street lamps too welcome dawn. This poem is very lovely really.

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Valsa George 08 April 2019

The twilight hour between night and dawn is beautifully painted here! Everything is looking radiant bathed in silver glow! The street lamps blink....! Very soon the sun will rise, giving the surroundings a fresh glow. Revival of beauty is painted By silver colour and fresh greenness In the middle lawn of highway, Grass is gently dancing and singing, A lovely picture!

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Aniruddha Pathak 08 April 2019

I wonder, why dawn always attracts one more than dusk. May be dawn is like a new-born child greeting life. Kumarmani Mahakul has a great ability to read a picture poetically.

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Kevin Patrick 07 April 2019

The magic of dawn, is like a painting by the Divine, your words bring that painting to life, a beautiful portrait Kumarmani, the dawn has been unlocked by your fine eyes. Brilliant Poem!

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Bernard F. Asuncion 07 April 2019

A well penned poem, sir Kumarmani that captures the wonderful dawn.....10+++++++++++++

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