For welcoming dawn time is ready,
Our city is ready, road is ready,
To preach us, our daddy is ready,
A readiness whispers to watch beauty
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As he does for us everyday at dawn, A pure purity is poured and powered, Powdered silver is sprinkled over sky, - - - - - - - - - - you have a way with words, my friend! Has to return and read this beauty again
'God will preach us with his wisdom As he does for us everyday at dawn, A pure purity is poured and powered, Powdered silver is sprinkled over sky, '.. are lovely lines. A pure poem on dawn that gives peace and happiness. Thanks.
Science my childhood days dawn has become my FAVORITE AND THIS HAS GREATLY MOTIVATED MIND. You have penned a beautiful poem silvery imagery you have captured has true worth. This pleases and motivates mind. We feel God's tenderness very well.
A mood captured so perfectly....anticipation is palpable. This is great work, Kumarmani.
Thank you for the very clear welcoming of the dawn, which is supported with a great photo.
And again here you are.... spelling thoughts and beautiful mind on poetry paper again.. It really a good way of welcoming new day, by positive thoughts and hopeful mind! :)
Wow! Wow! Darling poet Kumar, tenderness is of course the gift given by God. Silvery beauty is painted in entire sky. Dawn is nature's revival of day. Thank you darling poet for sharing.
As the streets light will switch off the sunlight will take over everything marking the beginning of a nes and fresh day. A wonderful poem on dawn.
The most powerful and calm silvery imagery of this poem nicely motivates us and we feel the beauty of this dazzling poem. You have perfectly captured the silvery moment of the nature and scenic beauty of a city street. Lovely street lamps too welcome dawn. This poem is very lovely really.
The twilight hour between night and dawn is beautifully painted here! Everything is looking radiant bathed in silver glow! The street lamps blink....! Very soon the sun will rise, giving the surroundings a fresh glow. Revival of beauty is painted By silver colour and fresh greenness In the middle lawn of highway, Grass is gently dancing and singing, A lovely picture!
I wonder, why dawn always attracts one more than dusk. May be dawn is like a new-born child greeting life. Kumarmani Mahakul has a great ability to read a picture poetically.
The magic of dawn, is like a painting by the Divine, your words bring that painting to life, a beautiful portrait Kumarmani, the dawn has been unlocked by your fine eyes. Brilliant Poem!
A well penned poem, sir Kumarmani that captures the wonderful dawn.....10+++++++++++++
A readiness whispers to embrace beauty..... great