Friday, February 17, 2006

Welcomed Comments

Rating: 3.9

Welcomed after absence, the returning queen
Meets maidens in her court who strew fresh scented flowers
And shower her with sweet dew praise.
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Linda Hepner
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Chuck Audette 21 February 2006

Or was it a stooped back from those low ceilings in the cottage with the seven dwarfs? Seriously, though, really cool poem. - chuck

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Anna Russell 21 February 2006

I really loved reading this. Something I think most women will relate to. A poem of inner strength and hope. Hugs Anna xxx

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Gina Onyemaechi 17 February 2006

Cleverly worked rhyme symmetry, Lind. For me, this as much unites the 2 halves of the tale as much as it sharpens their contrast. And the wistful and sorrowful tone of the second half has left me at least imagining all sorts regarding the queen's untold story. An enchanting sextuplet of lines, Lind! Warmly, Gina.

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***** ********* 17 February 2006

A lesson indeed to any returning queen Linda! very nice work indeed. Smiling at you Tai

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Linda Hepner

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