Monday, June 13, 2022

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Rating: 5.0

A cloud came out, the sun went in
More drizzle was my life
I prayed then hoped-but just got rope-
My heart: All slice and diced!
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Bryan Taplits
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A forceful short poem. But the revelation at the close is " My heart a hangman's noose- Yes, I love you just the same"… great! Loved it.

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Bryan Taplits 14 June 2022

Thank you for your very kind analysis-and words. I appreciate the feedback. Take care.

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