Saturday, December 23, 2017

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As long as his dreams are alive,
Sure, he has a fair chance to survive,
He is moving on a dangerous track,
Why she is shouting, "He is a crack."
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Valsa George 31 December 2017

A lovely poem! Admire your romantic spirit! Have a New Year of greater creativity!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 27 December 2017

A lovely poem! I would like to quote, “Looking into his eyes why she is shy? ..Prayers for her lover! Looking at the sky! ..The same crazy in disciplined naughty boy! ...Different metals, can they form an alloy? ” Indeed you are a romantic poet..I like your love poems! !

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O Poet Me Poety 24 December 2017

Such a beautiful composition on love you are as romantic at this age all will remember us as lovers on poetic stage you like romance as much as most do... I am the only ROMANTIC LOVER LIVING TRUE... YOU ARE more wonderful May Allah bless you- - JA

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Rajnish Manga 24 December 2017

Beautiful write. Let the infinite power of love overtake everything negative in our lives and bloom as an all season flower in our hearts. Thanks for sharing such an amazing and sweetly rhymed poem with us. love is a magic, a force a might Anytime can change the wrong in the right

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Khalida Bano Ali 23 December 2017

What a love poem, loved it..................

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