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Very ineresting. I like the transition from good to bad when u spoke of mindfulness. Very well written.

I like your poem. Mindfulness is very important and is key to everything in life. I give it a rating of 9.

greatness and tribulation for our endeavours are always welcome, but it is still important to remember who we are inside and stick with the principles that got us to the level we are at, well written.

IT INSPIRES, I LOVE IT. KEEP IT UP

Such an in depth heartfelt write. I so love the expression and content of this piece. Well done indeed

Your genuine stand is inspirational. The future is what matters, so what we do today will truly shape our destiny. Thanx for the invitation to such a nice poem. Kenyan Boy.

An amazingly thought provoking piece, i think the overall message is to me despite of everything, it is all temporary like shifting sand....i wonder if the last word in the second stanza might be a typo of loss? other than that, i could never write a piece such as this... well done, im in awe...tyvm karen

A good attempt.It gives courage, self confidence etc.congrats

Well done little Buddha - the master is smiling I expect

wow! ! I what an inspirational poem! I must admit that this is excellently the best poem I ever read....not only is it inspirational, but educative, scholastic and wonderful! Thanks for inviting me. Naseeru from Nigeria. West africa.

simple yet inspiring.....really worth-reading...

You are truly wise beyond your years. I really enjoyed reading your words of inspiration. Buddy Bee Anthony

It's deeply helpful for our life...how sth come from nth?

Such a sweet poem that questions and answers by itself, nice flow man keep it up. Really Loved it and its ending was quite surprising, I mean our thoughts are kinda similar [3. ?£€G€?ÐÅRŸ?

Its a real deep thought and being happy is the literal meed of any being... Loved it mate

There is beauty in your lines, and it comes from within. Am so hmappy i read this - in spite of abysmal poverty i stand with honest, tells our story so well. Keep the ink flowing sir.

There is beauty in your lines, and it comes from within. Am so hmappy i read this - in spite of abysmal poverty i stand with honest, tells our story so well. Keep the ink flowing sir.

There is beauty in your lines, and it comes from within. Am so hmappy i read this - in spite of abysmal poverty i stand with honest, tells our story so well. Keep the ink flowing sir.

thanks for sharing... it is a mindfully.. thought out

Mindfulness is very important Good poem