Friday, March 6, 2015

Welcome To My World Comments

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How nice of you to visit my world,
I wondered who was at the door,
Yes, I'm alone..... don't be concerned,
I've been this way oftentimes before
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Lora Colon
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Amitava Sur 17 March 2015

So perfectly you detailed the state of mind, Lora! An eye opener, I can feel the intensity in it very well. A heart wrenching fact is revealed here.I wish you have the strength. I hold your hand firmly. You may read my poem PASSAGE IN MY LIFE.

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Stephen Katona 15 March 2015

Beautifully written. Please accept this verbal cup of tea to revitalise your confidence and allow the flickering of a new dream on a day that is a little brighter than the last.

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Brian Johnston 07 March 2015

Yes, each of us deal with life the best we can, I know. And though I wish you so much more happiness than seems to come your way, I realize too that however we perceive our own lives, it is our perception and also has a dreamlike quality to it. I really like this poem Lora and yes I would like some tea! Thank you. Can we sit in your garden for a while? That would be nice. My life might in fact not be one that would bring happiness to you though it does suffice for me. You and your poetry are always fine company however in my experience.

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Lora Colon

Lora Colon

Missouri - United States
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