Thursday, December 31, 2015

Welcome Sweet Sixteen (2016) Comments

Rating: 5.0

Adieu 2015 and Welcome sweet sixteen
Memorable may become on planet your sojourn.
15 for a human, a ripe age for rebellion,
16 for floating or chasing dreams or infatuations.
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Ratnakar Mandlik
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Anjandev Roy 03 August 2019

a ripe age for rebellion......fine poem. Thank u. anjandev roy.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 26 March 2019

Achievements, gains, pains, joys or strife, Man made commodities not linked with any belief. Weaknesses imbibed by Creator in the human mind Act on their own to destroy our joy n to it grind......so true and impressive. Beautiful poem.

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Philo Yan 12 March 2019

Some may have a sweet 16 while the rest struggles with the ugly duckling syndrome or internal angst against the world..

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 05 March 2019

thank you but now I am 19 past 16 did you not read my bestest poem MOMS SMILES PLEASE DO Thanx

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Jasbir Chatterjee 04 September 2017

Actually, each year is sweet in itself; it depends on how you take it...

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Dave Walker 05 September 2016

To be young again, sixteen seems so distant now. A great poem.

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Geetha Jayakumar 27 July 2016

Beautiful welcome to sweet sixteen. Well I am too late maybe in mid way of 16 to write comment on welcoming new year. Years doesn't matter, all years are good. Everything is manmade. all pain and joy is manmade. Enjoyed reading it.

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Mihaela Pirjol 20 July 2016

This is a great poem to celebrate the passing of time, the New Year, with a new hope in our human hearts; that we may never forget our humane nature. A great poem.

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Susan Williams 16 June 2016

What a unique way to welcome in the new year and say farewell to the old year. I like your philosophy- - - Entitled is human for the blame and not the year.. That is wise. I also appreciated the wisdom and humor in these lines- - - - Adieu 2015 and Welcome sweet sixteen Memorable may become on planet your sojourn. 15 for a human, a ripe age for rebellion, 16 for floating or chasing dreams or infatuations.

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Igwilo Vincent Somto 08 June 2016

Entitled is human for the blame and not the year, wonderful piece of writing in combination of both growth and transition into a new year, love it sir, i gave it a 10

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 07 June 2016

Wow great fun poem written creatively, in nostalgic tones. Thumbs up. And tnx for yor coment.

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Bharati Nayak 16 May 2016

Adieu 2015, age of adolescent's rebellion and welcome 2016(stweet Sixteen) , year of dreams- - -Thanks for the marvelous sharing.

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Liza Sudina 14 May 2016

sweet sixteen - It is sweet indeed!

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New year with new hopes and dreams, nicely penned, wish of all

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Seema Chowdhury 24 February 2016

A beautiful and a sincere write.

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Lily Yang 12 February 2016

Wish you sweet sixteen in your heart forever. Happy new year to you and your family.

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Edmund Strolis 10 February 2016

A triumph of the human spirit to be optimistic but not foolishly naive. Sweet sixteen so well expressed and inspirational!

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 07 February 2016

comparing year 15 and 16 to the teenage add colour to the poem. thanks

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Lyn Paul 31 January 2016

Where is this world going, I wonder. Enjoyed reading. Good wishes to you for this new year. Thank You

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Wes Vogler 18 January 2016

Ho Ratnakar I believe last time we conferred I had you mixed up with another and offered lessons. My apologies.

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Ratnakar Mandlik

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