Adieu 2015 and Welcome sweet sixteen
Memorable may become on planet your sojourn.
15 for a human, a ripe age for rebellion,
16 for floating or chasing dreams or infatuations.
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Achievements, gains, pains, joys or strife, Man made commodities not linked with any belief. Weaknesses imbibed by Creator in the human mind Act on their own to destroy our joy n to it grind......so true and impressive. Beautiful poem.
Some may have a sweet 16 while the rest struggles with the ugly duckling syndrome or internal angst against the world..
thank you but now I am 19 past 16 did you not read my bestest poem MOMS SMILES PLEASE DO Thanx
Actually, each year is sweet in itself; it depends on how you take it...
To be young again, sixteen seems so distant now. A great poem.
Beautiful welcome to sweet sixteen. Well I am too late maybe in mid way of 16 to write comment on welcoming new year. Years doesn't matter, all years are good. Everything is manmade. all pain and joy is manmade. Enjoyed reading it.
This is a great poem to celebrate the passing of time, the New Year, with a new hope in our human hearts; that we may never forget our humane nature. A great poem.
What a unique way to welcome in the new year and say farewell to the old year. I like your philosophy- - - Entitled is human for the blame and not the year.. That is wise. I also appreciated the wisdom and humor in these lines- - - - Adieu 2015 and Welcome sweet sixteen Memorable may become on planet your sojourn. 15 for a human, a ripe age for rebellion, 16 for floating or chasing dreams or infatuations.
Entitled is human for the blame and not the year, wonderful piece of writing in combination of both growth and transition into a new year, love it sir, i gave it a 10
Wow great fun poem written creatively, in nostalgic tones. Thumbs up. And tnx for yor coment.
Adieu 2015, age of adolescent's rebellion and welcome 2016(stweet Sixteen) , year of dreams- - -Thanks for the marvelous sharing.
New year with new hopes and dreams, nicely penned, wish of all
Wish you sweet sixteen in your heart forever. Happy new year to you and your family.
A triumph of the human spirit to be optimistic but not foolishly naive. Sweet sixteen so well expressed and inspirational!
comparing year 15 and 16 to the teenage add colour to the poem. thanks
Where is this world going, I wonder. Enjoyed reading. Good wishes to you for this new year. Thank You
Ho Ratnakar I believe last time we conferred I had you mixed up with another and offered lessons. My apologies.
a ripe age for rebellion......fine poem. Thank u. anjandev roy.