Tuesday, August 30, 2016

Welcome Rains Comments

Rating: 4.9

Sea-sons showered pains,
Injured knee on trousers stains,
Still thanks if it rains.
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Akhtar Jawad
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Valsa George 01 September 2016

Lovely poem.... It flows like small rivulets on window panes during a torrential down pour!

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 31 August 2016

Sea sons showered pains..The beginning itself very dramatic and encourages the reader to read further..clearly written poem on rain..Thank you Akhtar

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Bharati Nayak 31 August 2016

Rain evokes emotion.Rain just affect every one.A beautiful poem of rain. To quote from the poem- - - 'Titillated eyes smile Write in her glassy profile In rains she is fragile '

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Kumarmani Mahakul 31 August 2016

Fine rain washed greenery, Leaves from nature's refinery, ...painting of poet the scenery of nature to wash out pain of mind and fill happiness in mind is definitely interesting step. Writing in glassy profile rain withstands with dream and reality...10

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Rajnish Manga 30 August 2016

Excellent rain-drenched landscape arising out of the poet's lyrical words along with giving vent to poet's own delicate feelings. Thanks for sharing.

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Khalid Saifullah 30 August 2016

A beautiful write on rains.......................................

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Abduhoo Salamath 30 August 2016

A wet summer dressing, The naughty rains so tressing, For me a wet blessing. well done..a poem as per climate...nice written..

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Kelly Kurt 30 August 2016

A subject of many poems, rain seems to have a universal affect on man's psyche. Well penned my friend

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M Asim Nehal 30 August 2016

Excellent poem, I like the rhyming part of this poem, to me it gave the same feeling like raindrops are falling on my head....10++++

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