Our great niece, Emily, is in the hospital…she was admitted yesterday…for the most wonderful of reasons…baby Olivia, is on her way…
If I was to give advice to Emily and Brandon…if I was to take the time…I'd put it in a poem…because advice sounds so much better in rhyme.
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Advice is the cheapest medicine available in market! A great poem with philosophical intensity!
Beautiful poem, beautifully rhymed, BUT young parents need their own time to GROW, dear Poet Jim, they need not such long poem to refer to, all they need is LOVE from her family and especially from you for your lovekly niece and her husband Brandon
Beautiful poem imbued with wisdom and insight. Very enlightening.
My congratulations, Jim, and also to the young parents Emily and Brandon, beautiful names.Gorgeous poem, dear Jim, excellently rendered 5 Stars!